this poem is sent by one of my orkut friend "raindrops" who is from kannur, kerala. now doing masters in computers and networking at bangalore.
soothing breeze is blowing with fuss
singing river is frothing with joy
twittering bird is feeding her kid
squirrels are churing with its fellows
but somewhere someone something
a small, a little a something
there's something
missing in my eyes
a turn to my bleeding heart
i realize its chillness its stresses
a turn to my tiry eyes
i feel its lonliness
i feel its thirst
i feel its urge
wandering in reach of the blue eyes
a reaching for the caring eyes the blue eyes
miles to go and miles to go for it
even then i go for him
filled with doubts,filled with ease
full of love full of affection
stranger with harsh saying
saying all about him
both of extremities-harsh and nice
to which to stick to
to which to stick to
still a soothing touch to the one
still a greeny feeling to the one
still a caring love to the one
to the oneto the one
i seek for
to the one i long for
its only then i understand my thought
my ideas go for the one whom i seek for
its only then i understand my longing
the sharpness of my eyes
the everlasting bunch of love
but...i enjoy my curiosity
i enjoy my search
eventhough it is a melancholy
a sweet, soothing melancholy
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soothing breeze is blowing with fuss
singing river is frothing with joy
twittering bird is feeding her kid
squirrels are churing with its fellows
miles to go and miles to go for it
....thats what I have to say!
Dear Raindrops,
i don't know why you have not published this poem.hope you are a blogger!thanks J.P for publishing this!but help raindrops to publish it in her own blog!
good luck for the search n keep it going as you have to reach the best!at times you may reach him early;no need to travel the miles n miles.
a well drafted poem.congrats!
sasneham,
anu
dear anupama
thank you for your comments. i had told to release the poem of RAINDROPS in her blog. she said she has no blog. and i told her i can help her to creat one.
but she said she will do it later.
she has more collections but at her at kannoor.
i have motivated her. right now she is at bangalore doing her studies. she should be going home only in december.
till then i might publish her works in my blog.
thanks once again anumapa.
FOR SOME TIME, I HAD NOTHING IN MY THIS BLOG SLOT. I HAVE DECIDED TO SCRIBBLE SOME THING. ONY THE THINGS MY ENGLISH LANGUAE IS NOT THAT.
IF READERS COULD GET THE MESSAGE, THEN I AM SATISFIED.
best regards
jp
nb: my regards to raviyettan
ts only then i understand my thought
my ideas go for the one whom i seek for
its only then i understand my longing
the sharpness of my eyes
the everlasting bunch of love
but...i enjoy my curiosity
i enjoy my search
eventhough it is a melancholy
a sweet, soothing melancholy
very good...
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